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I dabble a little...
« on: July 25, 2009, 10:56:12 PM »
Or is it Dapple? lol

Anyone ever do poetry..?
This is one of a some i've written... takes a deep mind to understand it, or another
that is into poetry.. some have that insight right away, poetry can be very beautiful
it can be consoling, and also great entertainment for the mind



One yearns for yesterdays, one prays for tomorrows, the epic of life, truth, lies, manifest from the incoherance
of the abilty or inablity to beleive, life we are lost, emotional and irrational, lifeless be scorned, in death we are found,
peaceful, missed and praised upon, deathless is valued, immortal shadow wingless being futureless, lifeless you are warned
truthless is emotional denial, lieless is irrationally unbeleivable, yesterdays yearn for a tomorrows life is deathless, lifeless
and misunderstood, incoherantless to manifest(or vice versa)manifest to incoherantless



If you do dabble a little it would be great to see it, this piece i have not named
So.. all the poets, young or old or even new phrasers.. come one come all
Let me see ya hearts SWING!


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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #1 on: July 27, 2009, 07:14:15 PM »
You can post your poems here!!!

Would LOVE to see them, even the tiniest of phrases you've developed!
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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #2 on: July 27, 2009, 07:22:01 PM »
That was good.  Do I have your permission to show it to my pastor?  (Though...I better not tell her what website I got it from!!!)

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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2009, 07:32:12 PM »
You can show it to anyone you like, but it isn't really religiously based
its more of a metaphor of thoughts, although there are many ways to read this and understand it, it is oneself in your own understanding how it relates
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« Reply #4 on: July 27, 2009, 10:23:37 PM »
Thanks!  I know it was not religiously based, but I feel people of faith will find it meaningful.

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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #5 on: December 10, 2009, 11:13:54 AM »
This is it 13.. maybe you can put some of yours here as well!
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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #6 on: December 10, 2009, 11:17:02 AM »
Thanks..I may have to scour the old dusty boxes though, the ones that come to mind prolly arent printable, lmao

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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #7 on: December 10, 2009, 11:20:16 AM »
This is one that i did a while back...
My daughter in the Yellow on my avatar fell in love with it
Yes i do have happier, love poems and deep thought poems and prose..
i have MANY.. but i'll start with this one

Silent Agony in glowing Bliss

This is dedicated to my best friend and my most feared enemy..
The one who laughed at my jokes..
The one who laughed at my pain..
The one who held my hand..
The one who cut me in shame..
The one who sang me to sleep..
The one who slain all my sheep..
The one who wiped my tears with a soft tissue so sweet..
The one who told me, if you hate you shall defeat..
The one who gave without taking..
The one who took without giving..
The one that dared to love..
The one who drew me a black dove..
The one who laid numb with a man for the money she needed..
The one who called whore, you slut, your soul should be deleted
The one who tended the bruises and bandaged the cuts..
The one who said.. he should of killed you, stabbed you in the gut
The one who served me soup, juice and bread...
The one who spoke words, that even she dread...
The one who held me, silently in time of need..
The one who slapped my face, out of pure greed..
The one who prayed for a teacher, some guidence, with love and patience..
The one who said you are nothing, nobody.. no ones heart would be so pure..
The one that said.. Girl.. you don't need them drugs..
The one who said.. Get high.. forget about what tugs..
The one who said.. get up it's time for work, you must go!
The one who said.. sleep, it's the only peace you know..
The one who beleives in her dreams, in miracles, has faith in her heart
The one who said.. you're an embaressment don't even start
The one who held a child, so proud of all achieved, happy with what she got..
The one who said.. a mistake,you only live and act like it's not..
The one who said.. please please.. don't go, don't leave me on the spot..
The one who said.. no i won't why should i.. when you is all i got..
Look YOU, i'll have the last word.. the last vow.. i'll find another
with the strength, the love and the power.. and YOU i will never know again
My Best friend, My Enemy
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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #8 on: December 10, 2009, 11:33:19 AM »
oo....powerful stuff...*raises hands in mock defeat*...i bow to your talent milady :)

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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #9 on: July 12, 2010, 10:20:11 PM »
I made this post a while back for those that Dabble a little :P I love poetry and i do write my own. I've got tons but this one i wanted to share, maybe we can fill this up with beautiful poetry :D
It doesn't matter if you wrote it or not.. just would love to see them.. alot are so inspirational and helpful.

Let's resolve.... To Be a little better....
Then we were before...
To be a little kinder and to smile a little more...
To go about our living with a firm hold on our nerve..
And to be a little wiser as our judgement we reserve...
To be a little blinder to the things that hurt our pride...
To be a little calmer and take life in our stride..
To be a little gentler.. no matter how we feel..
That is a way be can make happiness real...
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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #10 on: July 12, 2010, 10:47:23 PM »
wow, I know now why you go by Imagination my dear! You really should try and get this stuff published, God has given you a talent, I as glad to see you are using it. Great stuff, no if's and's or but's.

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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #11 on: July 12, 2010, 10:52:40 PM »
Beautiful Imagin. I do dabble, but have none available at the moment. I will be sure to post them here when I do.

In the meantime, I may just post some other poets stuff. Some of the ones that I find amazing.

Again Imagin. You have quite a way with words...Beautiful.



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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #12 on: July 13, 2010, 03:41:12 AM »
Lovely words Imagin. Why not publish your poems?

I do dabble in fact, it was all I did for quite a long time.  I wrote a poem for quite a few members of my close family. 

I also used to "do the poetry" at work if someone was leaving for another job, having a baby or just a special birthday. 

In fact I was having a clear out the other day and came across some of my poems and I was really laughing at them (I generally do "funny" poems).

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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #13 on: July 13, 2010, 08:48:25 AM »
Beautiful poems imagin!! I think it takes a lot of inner soul awakening to write deep poetry as these.

I think it also helps to soothe the soul when we feel sorrow and allows us to become even more expressive.

Thanks for sharing. 

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Re: I dabble a little...
« Reply #14 on: July 13, 2010, 03:03:53 PM »
We both loved the ocean and also would
soak ourselves in the majestic skies, our minds imagining in-sync
calmly and relaxed we would drift away together, feeling and touching timeless magic,
upon its vast wideness, always intrigued by its deepness
often searching and discovering its many ultimate tranquilities.

So serene the soft whispering breezes the gentle ripples of waves massaging our souls,
the calling of the horizons warmth filling each fiber of our being,
absorbing every light kiss of ocean mist, enveloping each intake of the purest air
becoming comfortly safe but still remaining valiantly lost in its mystery.
Looking up as we lay upon the seas never ending mystical blanket, unknowing of what dwells and lurks beneath.

The oceans evening of twilight glistens with bright radiant stars,
every twinkle illuminates our past, reflecting on the oceans waves trusting in their heavenly paths.
 
They guide us like lifes ever shining light, a line of beacons, intergralically woven...
if we'd ask do we go this way, or that... the answer lies within
our own internal compass contained within the deepness of heart, existing in the universe of our soul,
will guide our minds and body, to always bring us safely home.

I wrote this one its more prose then poetry, hope you enjoy it!
The meaning is follow your heart.. do what your heart desires, feel and breath with life.
You can also get your own feeling out of it, i haven't named it someday i will lol
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